With the sudden change of essay title I struggled to comprise a presentation that I was happy with. However, I managed to create a PowerPoint presentation and a brief few pointers for my speech. I found the peer observation incredibly invaluable especially due to the fact that I changed my question so recently. The advice given gave me the confidence to be able to take it on board and run with the idea. I think with the research I have already gathered I am able to tease apart the descriptive side and create a more well developed analytical essay, using relevant scholarship as opposed to just description.

With the advice I have been given I aim to create a detailed essay plan and a brief structure of how I want my essay to be complied. Following this I aim to have paragraph breakdowns that are easy to follow as well as littered with analytical content  based off of the research and scholarship I have collected over the latter half of this term.