Improve Script:

Introduction:

The goal of this task is to finish and improve the initial work done for the script in a previous task. The idea is to work with a larger intertextual framework in the script and maybe include a stronger message in the subtext.

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Conclusion:

Overall I am pleased with how this script evolved. A new minor character developed from work on the dialogue (Kyle). The piece worked out better than I expected, however, I do want to work on developing the script to finally include Alice and to develop a larger narrative. Regarding a stronger message and subtext, I am unsure. As of now, I have not got the full plot worked out so am finding it difficult to include a larger message. Regarding subtext, well that’s a little tricky I think there is some subtle subtext embedded in the story so far but that is subjective on my part.