Knowledge and understanding

Your work has covered a range of the module content to address the essay requirements and show knowledge and understanding of the concepts. Understanding of the chosen paper was demonstrated to some extent in the work although your three themes  could have been addressed with more depth.

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Discussion and analysis

There is a good level of discussion in the work with evidence of some  analysis in aspects of the work. You have presented some good points in the work to show knowledge of research in the work and needed to deveolp this further in the critique which needed more focussed discussion. Where you have discussed the EBP  you have given an example  of how this can be achieved in practice showing that you are linking theory to practice . The discussion on ethics did not fully develop as you  did not clearly ntegrate EBP in the discussions

 

 

Evidence of reading

You have presented an extensive reference list of current and up to date sources of literature which is good. However,  there was scope for you to use he evidence more effectively to develop the level of analysis in the work as this was not fully sustained.

 

 

Academic style (including referencing, structure, grammar)

Work is written in an acceptable academic style although you do need to pay attention to syntax as some sentences were unclear. Minor omissions evident in the reference list.

 

Summary

The work has addressed the learning outcomes for the module 

 

Feed Forward 

  There was potential for the work  to develop further  especially the level of analysis in the work as this was not fully sustained.  As you progress you need to develop your thinking beyond the  the guidlines as they are there to provide a basic guide to start your essay but you need to further develop your work to show higher order thinking. You mainly make statements from the evidence to make a point or give a view. To progress further you need to  apply the evidence through discussion of what the evidence is stating and how it links to concept or arguments being put forward by you.

 Proof read your work for errors with syntax and accuracy of your sources

 

Please follow the links below for further support.

 

 

https://library.roehampton.ac.uk/studytoolkit/studiosity 

  

https://moodle.roehampton.ac.uk/course/view.php?id=3700 

  

 

Signature (marker)

Mariama Seray-Wurie

Date

03/06/2024